Creating worded ephemera

For study task 5 I had to create some worded ephemera to go a long side my film for press reasons. I feel I often struggle with these things as I have a habit of underselling my own work and also keep my bios/synopsis ect very brief as i like cutting to the point however for this kind of things embellishment is important to sell a film to get people to actually watch it.

My Synopsis of the film:

A messy degenerate who has marooned himself in a desert shack finds himself thirsty after a mischievous yellow creature steals his one source of water forcing him to chase it across a weird land in pursuit of a quenching relief. 

This is a slightly embellished version of the synopsis and is purely about the plot another version describes the plot but also the film itself:

Thirsty is a colourful and silly 2D animated short film which plays homage to classic cartoons like spongebob squarepants whilst gaining stylistic influence from a range of illustrators and designers. Thirsty is about a messy degenerate who has marooned himself in a desert shack and finds himself extremely thirsty after a mischievous yellow creature steals his one source of water, forcing him to chase them across a weird land in pursuit of a quenching relief. 

My personal Bio:

Oscar Barany is an animator and visual artist from London graduating from BA(Hons) Animation at leeds college of art. He makes Animations, Live visuals for Musicians and Interactive art. He predominantly uses characterful 2D animations across platforms and enjoys pushing the boundaries of where his animated characters can go. Over the last two years he has working with a wide range of clients from Musicians to Museums across the UK as well as developing his own independent practice. See other work at http://ozbox.tv