It was good to once again see my footage on a projector rather than on a screen I got to see how the footage looked in its proper context as well as allowing me to step away from it. Although there was not much feedback during the crit the fact I was forced to render it off meant I could keep watching my footage without it being in premiere which can be distracting.
Somethings I noticed as well as other pointed out to me were:
The edit of the animation sometimes did not quite flow. This mostly happened in the first section were there are a lot of cutes between the two characters predominantly for action and reaction. It was mentioned which I agree with that the cuts a bit laboured and each scene holds a little too long. I think this was in reaction to what I was doing at the start of this project which was cutting from some shots too quickly. I’ve realised I have a habit of just applying the same solution to everything rather than objectively
I need to go back an reanimate sections. Although I was happy with the delivery of gags and most of the scene some were animated in a ways to save a bit of time to get the film ready for submission or things I missed out to do in scenes have been added yet. It is unlikely I will be able to do this for submission but I want this film to be the best it possibly can. I obviously want to keep to some deadline I can't keep editing the film forever but I do want to clean things up if they are letting the overall quality of the animation drop. I also want to take this opportunity when I do go back into scenes is to reinforce or create new gags if I can. For instance one suggested to me was to have the yellow character wave back when running across the desert which I'd planned to reanimate since it had been done quickly in after effects.
The sound design as Ive said before needs revisiting but the interim sound design is still too quite.
Other than this I am so far very happy with my film.
I need to go back an reanimate sections. Although I was happy with the delivery of gags and most of the scene some were animated in a ways to save a bit of time to get the film ready for submission or things I missed out to do in scenes have been added yet. It is unlikely I will be able to do this for submission but I want this film to be the best it possibly can. I obviously want to keep to some deadline I can't keep editing the film forever but I do want to clean things up if they are letting the overall quality of the animation drop. I also want to take this opportunity when I do go back into scenes is to reinforce or create new gags if I can. For instance one suggested to me was to have the yellow character wave back when running across the desert which I'd planned to reanimate since it had been done quickly in after effects.
The sound design as Ive said before needs revisiting but the interim sound design is still too quite.
Other than this I am so far very happy with my film.
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